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Post by Moonfire on Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:08 pm

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"Bluepaw" Lionpaw called, "were are you? We need to talk!" "I'm right here you stupid fur-ball!" she meowed "What do you want?" "I. . .I. . ." he murmered, "Yes Lionheart?!?" Bluepaw growled. "Do you. . . what to go traning with me," he meowed as a reply, "you're an amazing apperentic. . ." "Sure!" she meowed and licked his ear, "lets go! C`on!" "Okay!" Lionpaw replyed, "Traning to fight, then hunt for the clan?"

"Sure" she meowed, "I'm up for that." They ran off throught the spring like weather to the traning hollow.


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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw

Post by Skillfire on Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:09 pm

Good Job so far Moonfire! You're a good writer! Smile Wink Razz

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Post by Moonfire on Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:29 pm

Thank you Knight! I'm glad you joined! Very Happy
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Chapter one-

On a warm and sunny morning a young she-cat apprentic came from her den, and walked over to her friend. "Wake up!" she growled, "we'll be late to traning! Wake up you stupid fuzz-ball! Wake up!" "What?" her friend replyed. "What did I mi. . ." "Were going to be late with our mentors!" she growled. The tom sprang to feet and raced out the apprentic's den. "There you two are," said the she-cats mentor Iceriver. "Bluepaw you know you'r not supost to be late!" "Sorry. . ." Bluepaw meowed, "Mr. lazzy bones was not awake so I had to."

"Is that right" meowed Iceriver, "Lionpaw you know better. Off you go, try hunting for a while it might wake you up."

Hope you like it! Very Happy


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Post by Skillfire on Sun Mar 22, 2009 7:23 am

Good job Moon! Very Happy I love it!

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Post by Thorn on Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:32 am

It's brilliant, GO CATS! WOOT! Very Happy
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Post by Moonfire on Sun Mar 22, 2009 12:58 pm

lol! Don't go too crazy Thorn, you might hurt you'r self! lol!

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Post by Skillfire on Mon Mar 23, 2009 3:10 pm

Moonfire wrote: lol! Don't go too crazy Thorn, you might hurt you'r self! lol!

lol! That is not not nice Moon!

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Post by Thorn on Tue Mar 24, 2009 10:11 am

LOLERZ, Don't worry I won't Razz
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Post by Moonfire on Tue Mar 24, 2009 2:27 pm

Chapter 2-


Bluepaw & Lionpaw, hunted for the day, they caught many mice and went back to their mentors. "Good job Bluepaw & Lionpaw," meowed Iceriver, "Featherstar is going to be proud. She might even let you go the the Gathering to night with the rest of us." "Iceriver" mowed Lionpaw, "were is Hawkforst?" "You'r mentor" replyed Icerive, "Hawkforst is on a hunting party, I'll tell him you did a wounderful job. Don't you worry." He noded, then turned away to follow them home.

"What do you think do you thing Featherstar is going to say?" whispered Bluepaw. "I sure don't know. . ." meowed Lionpaw. When the cats returned home from hunting they carried some frish-kill to the elders den. And ate some for them self in the apprenetices den.


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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 24, 2009 4:36 pm

Cool story Leader!!! affraid
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Post by Thorn on Thu Mar 26, 2009 1:14 am

It's fantastic, ingenius, MEMORISING! It's pawsome! Very Happy
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Post by Moonfire on Sat Apr 11, 2009 7:47 am

If you were woundering about who is who here you go. . .

ThunderClan

Leader
Featherstar-a light colored she-cat

Deputy
Windrunner-a whiteish/blue tom

Warriors

Iceriver-white tom
Apprentice, Bluepaw

Hawkforst- ginger she-cat
Apprentice, Lionpaw

Ashpelt-reddish brown she-cat
Apprentice, Spottedpaw

Leafheart- light red tom

Queens

Goldenface-golden she-cat

Brightheart-a dright brown she-cat

Apprentices

Bluepaw- a blueish gray she-cat

Lionpaw- a golden tom and a mane like a lion

Spottedpaw- a multie colored she-cat

Elders

Splashheart-loved water formaly River Clan she-cat

Blackclaw- jet black tom

Sootpelt- a soot colored she-cat

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Post by Guest on Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:51 am

Cool Moonfire! I love it a lot!
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Post by Guest on Wed Apr 15, 2009 5:24 pm

Good job Moonfire. I really like it alot!

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Post by Moonfire on Thu Apr 16, 2009 6:51 am

Darkfire wrote:Good job Moonfire. I really like it alot!

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Post by Thorn on Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:22 am

Can't wait to hear the rest of the story..... there is more to come, right?

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Post by Talon on Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:33 am

nice moon! great job!

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Post by xXTwilightWolfXx on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:34 pm

lol! Great story so far Moonfire!

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