Lionpaw & Bluepaw
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Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Moonfire Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:08 pm
PROLOG
"Bluepaw" Lionpaw called, "were are you? We need to talk!" "I'm right here you stupid fur-ball!" she meowed "What do you want?" "I. . .I. . ." he murmered, "Yes Lionheart?!?" Bluepaw growled. "Do you. . . what to go traning with me," he meowed as a reply, "you're an amazing apperentic. . ." "Sure!" she meowed and licked his ear, "lets go! C`on!" "Okay!" Lionpaw replyed, "Traning to fight, then hunt for the clan?"
"Sure" she meowed, "I'm up for that." They ran off throught the spring like weather to the traning hollow.
"Bluepaw" Lionpaw called, "were are you? We need to talk!" "I'm right here you stupid fur-ball!" she meowed "What do you want?" "I. . .I. . ." he murmered, "Yes Lionheart?!?" Bluepaw growled. "Do you. . . what to go traning with me," he meowed as a reply, "you're an amazing apperentic. . ." "Sure!" she meowed and licked his ear, "lets go! C`on!" "Okay!" Lionpaw replyed, "Traning to fight, then hunt for the clan?"
"Sure" she meowed, "I'm up for that." They ran off throught the spring like weather to the traning hollow.
Last edited by Moonfire on Thu Apr 16, 2009 6:52 am; edited 3 times in total
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Skillfire Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:09 pm
Good Job so far Moonfire! You're a good writer! 
-Knight
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Moonfire Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:29 pm
Thank you Knight! I'm glad you joined! 
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Chapter one-
On a warm and sunny morning a young she-cat apprentic came from her den, and walked over to her friend. "Wake up!" she growled, "we'll be late to traning! Wake up you stupid fuzz-ball! Wake up!" "What?" her friend replyed. "What did I mi. . ." "Were going to be late with our mentors!" she growled. The tom sprang to feet and raced out the apprentic's den. "There you two are," said the she-cats mentor Iceriver. "Bluepaw you know you'r not supost to be late!" "Sorry. . ." Bluepaw meowed, "Mr. lazzy bones was not awake so I had to."
"Is that right" meowed Iceriver, "Lionpaw you know better. Off you go, try hunting for a while it might wake you up."
Hope you like it!
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Chapter one-
On a warm and sunny morning a young she-cat apprentic came from her den, and walked over to her friend. "Wake up!" she growled, "we'll be late to traning! Wake up you stupid fuzz-ball! Wake up!" "What?" her friend replyed. "What did I mi. . ." "Were going to be late with our mentors!" she growled. The tom sprang to feet and raced out the apprentic's den. "There you two are," said the she-cats mentor Iceriver. "Bluepaw you know you'r not supost to be late!" "Sorry. . ." Bluepaw meowed, "Mr. lazzy bones was not awake so I had to."
"Is that right" meowed Iceriver, "Lionpaw you know better. Off you go, try hunting for a while it might wake you up."
Hope you like it!
Last edited by Moonfire on Sat Apr 11, 2009 7:34 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Moonfire Sun Mar 22, 2009 12:58 pm
Don't go too crazy Thorn, you might hurt you'r self!
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Skillfire Mon Mar 23, 2009 3:10 pm
Moonfire wrote:
That is not not nice Moon!-Skillfire
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Moonfire Tue Mar 24, 2009 2:27 pm
Chapter 2-
Bluepaw & Lionpaw, hunted for the day, they caught many mice and went back to their mentors. "Good job Bluepaw & Lionpaw," meowed Iceriver, "Featherstar is going to be proud. She might even let you go the the Gathering to night with the rest of us." "Iceriver" mowed Lionpaw, "were is Hawkforst?" "You'r mentor" replyed Icerive, "Hawkforst is on a hunting party, I'll tell him you did a wounderful job. Don't you worry." He noded, then turned away to follow them home.
"What do you think do you thing Featherstar is going to say?" whispered Bluepaw. "I sure don't know. . ." meowed Lionpaw. When the cats returned home from hunting they carried some frish-kill to the elders den. And ate some for them self in the apprenetices den.
Bluepaw & Lionpaw, hunted for the day, they caught many mice and went back to their mentors. "Good job Bluepaw & Lionpaw," meowed Iceriver, "Featherstar is going to be proud. She might even let you go the the Gathering to night with the rest of us." "Iceriver" mowed Lionpaw, "were is Hawkforst?" "You'r mentor" replyed Icerive, "Hawkforst is on a hunting party, I'll tell him you did a wounderful job. Don't you worry." He noded, then turned away to follow them home.
"What do you think do you thing Featherstar is going to say?" whispered Bluepaw. "I sure don't know. . ." meowed Lionpaw. When the cats returned home from hunting they carried some frish-kill to the elders den. And ate some for them self in the apprenetices den.
Last edited by Ashpelt on Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:53 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : You made a mastake you forgot the 'star' at the end of the leaders name.)
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Thorn Thu Mar 26, 2009 1:14 am
It's fantastic, ingenius, MEMORISING! It's pawsome!
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Moonfire Sat Apr 11, 2009 7:47 am
If you were woundering about who is who here you go. . .
ThunderClan
Leader
Featherstar-a light colored she-cat
Deputy
Windrunner-a whiteish/blue tom
Warriors
Iceriver-white tom
Apprentice, Bluepaw
Hawkforst- ginger she-cat
Apprentice, Lionpaw
Ashpelt-reddish brown she-cat
Apprentice, Spottedpaw
Leafheart- light red tom
Queens
Goldenface-golden she-cat
Brightheart-a dright brown she-cat
Apprentices
Bluepaw- a blueish gray she-cat
Lionpaw- a golden tom and a mane like a lion
Spottedpaw- a multie colored she-cat
Elders
Splashheart-loved water formaly River Clan she-cat
Blackclaw- jet black tom
Sootpelt- a soot colored she-cat
ThunderClan
Leader
Featherstar-a light colored she-cat
Deputy
Windrunner-a whiteish/blue tom
Warriors
Iceriver-white tom
Apprentice, Bluepaw
Hawkforst- ginger she-cat
Apprentice, Lionpaw
Ashpelt-reddish brown she-cat
Apprentice, Spottedpaw
Leafheart- light red tom
Queens
Goldenface-golden she-cat
Brightheart-a dright brown she-cat
Apprentices
Bluepaw- a blueish gray she-cat
Lionpaw- a golden tom and a mane like a lion
Spottedpaw- a multie colored she-cat
Elders
Splashheart-loved water formaly River Clan she-cat
Blackclaw- jet black tom
Sootpelt- a soot colored she-cat
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Guest Wed Apr 15, 2009 5:24 pm
Good job Moonfire. I really like it alot!
-Darkfire
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Moonfire Thu Apr 16, 2009 6:51 am
Darkfire wrote:Good job Moonfire. I really like it alot!
-Darkfire
Thank you Darkfire.
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by Thorn Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:22 am
Can't wait to hear the rest of the story..... there is more to come, right?
Thorn
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Re: Lionpaw & Bluepaw
by xXTwilightWolfXx Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:34 pm
Great story so far Moonfire!~ Lava
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